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Just another school day, except this one felt a lot colder. As my foot got buried inside a puddle I wondered if this damp British weather could get any colder. I felt like I was stranded with no clothes on the North Pole. It was finally time for period 1.

 

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  1. Well done, Cris. I would love to see the whole piece.

    -RP

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